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My yellow-eyed penguin doodle is about yellow-eyed penguin threats. MEANINGS: Y=Yellow-eyed penguin in a net. Yours sincerely, Baylie Jane, Age: 11, Year: 6, Beckenham School
Hello my name is Oliver; I will tell you a little about my Yellow-eyed penguin picture. Thank you, for looking at my YEP picture,
Yours sincerely,
Hi my name is Cara and I am the artist of this piece of artwork. My artwork is about the ideal life for yellow-eyed penguins. MEANINGS: So now you know what every thing on my drawing means I hope you can understand my choices better. By: Cara, Age: 10, Year: 6, School: Beckenham school. Yellow-eyed penguin -
Conal age 11 Thank you for looking at my yellow eyed penguin picture, I hope you enjoyed it!!!
My name is Malayna and my picture art is about the threats of the yellow eyed penguin.
This picture is like doodle 4 Google BUT it’s about yellow eyed penguins. *************************************************** Collect your certificates from here. |
From Expert feedback from Dave McFarlane the Field Manager at the Yellow-eyed Penguin Trust
I can see the teaching and learning that has gone on to get the kids to that level of understanding. ************
Baylie You show a nice big net, dogs, tourist getting too close and an oil spill. These are indeed all threats to the YEPs. I like the way you have shown the spread of oil. Oil can certainly damage their feathers. I went to an oil spill course and some mallard ducks had been found coated in oil. We had to spend 20 to 25 minutes on each bird cleaning the oil off. Otherwise the birds get hypothermic and die. *************
Oliver What a clever bulldozer and I also like the net. All the disturbance shown in your poster is a problem with YEPs. The improper disposal of waste is a problem because it gets into the food chain and YEPs can eat it. Oil certainly is a problem. **************
Cara You show an untouched environment which is not shown so much on the mainland. It's a lovely optimistic representation. What a clever eye! The signage is good. At the moment I am working on signage like it at the Long Point reserve. You have covered everything well. ***************
Conal There is a great shark! Also the dog prints look good. Dogs are always a cause of concern as are cats. I have really enjoyed your poster especially that of the disappearing cats tail. It's all very clever - well done. ****************
Malayna There are lots of threats shown here. Of course you know that squid is food for the YEPs not a threat - although the YEPs don't eat the giant squid. I really like the way you have pointed out tourists taking a photo as being a threat. A camera toting tourist who MUST get close to a yellow-eyed penguin is a real threat to them. The jury is still out about whether seals are a real threat to YEPs but the other predators you mention certainly are. This is a very comprehensive poster. ***************
Hazel YEPs can also travel up sandy beaches as well rocks to get to their nests. You show an idyllic lifestyle for the penguins with few predators. What a poignant phrase 'I would put in more penguins, but sadly they are endangered'. It's a lovely poster. ***************
Zella It's good that you are showing a leopard seal. it is a potential predator although probably more of an issue in the sub-Antarctic Islands. The YEPs live at the seal's northernmost limit so yu don't see them around much at all. Sea lions would be more of a threat. ***************
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